众所周知，美国留学文书写作是非常重要的材料，很多学生在书写美国留学文书的时候并没有做好准备工作，从而在书写美国留学申请文书的时候出现各种问题。那么文书写作有哪些注意点?哪些东西会影响招生官的印象呢?
1、学校介绍型
I am an undergraduate in…University , the largest university anda cradle of scientific and technological talents in China.
点评：该同学的美国留学文书PS开头等于是一个申请学校的简介，这好像是在帮助学校做宣传，或表达你有多了解该学校，而不是写个人陈述了。这是没有意义的开头，白白浪费了字数，最容易被秒拒掉。
2、救世主型
I am a problem solver. I have an impulse as a kind of instincts to solvevarious problems before me and enjoy doing that. Since I was a little boy, a voice from President Franklin Roosevelt has constantly hovered around my mind, "The world can be changed by man's endeavor, …
点评：一副救世主的形象，小时候就受富兰克林的影响，立志改变世界。美国留学文书PS的写作一定要个人化具体化，别吹牛，甚至带着一种霸权主义思维。
3、重复简历型
I earned my Bachelor of Science degree in … Sciences with a specialization in … in 2002 at … university
点评：不要去重复简历中的东西，这在很多学校的美国留学申请文书PS要求中明确提到，个人陈述的写作要具体到事件上，事件解决上，而不要单纯重复已有的内容。
4、言幼稚型
'Why the gecko can climb on the wall while we can't-' 'Why the leaves turn red in autumn' 'How many stars are there in the sky-' When I was in childhood, I always kept asking my mom all kinds of questions。I am especially interested in how things work, I can even take apart things for several hours in order to find out its principle.
点评：上来就回忆童年少年自己如何有着远大抱负，who cares?个人陈述字数有限，却用这么多话描述童年，没有任何意义。学校想知道你如何看待未来，而不是如何度过过去。
如果你去美国读研，那么选专业、选学校看连续四年排名，查看：2016年Usnews美国研究生专业排名
5、抄袭句式型
As a student majoring in Computer Science, I began my odyssey since I entered undergraduate program. Indeed, having entered this splendid computer world, I am more than greedy for something new.
点评：Odyssey 和more than greedy for something new 这种句式不知道是从哪里学到的，很多同学在用。但你要知道，老外最恨抄袭，最喜原创，所以利害关系大家想想吧。
6、犹抱琵琶型
Making a right decision at the right time is very important for a young people .At present, I have come to a critical point in my life when I have to make a decision concerning my future course of action. Only a perceptive understanding of oneself will enable one to chart his proper action. Aftercarefully thinking, reviewing my life and analyzing my personality, I make the determination and choose to apply for graduate study in XXX. And I choose to specialize in communications which I will pursue a lifelong career.
点评：重点放在自己要做重大决定上了，人生的转折点，然后来上句所谓名言警句，这是浪费字数。在有限的字数里，同学们应该学会直接，并且抓住重点，突出自己最有优势的方面，最有特色的方面。
我们明确需要完成以下五个任务:
1. 根据学生目标和背景分析其机会和问题
(To help clients analyze opportunities and problems associated with their goals and background)
2. 通过头脑风暴协助学生进行自我内省，与学生共同分析个人规划和职业目标，让学生清晰个人定位，让学生的教育投资获得最佳回报。
3. 提出切实可行的方案帮助学生解决问题和抓住机会
(To recommend practical approaches to addressing these opportunities and problems)
4. 协助督促学生执行完成我们提供的建议
(To assist the clients in implementing the recommendations when necessary)
5. 保护学生隐私，严守机密信息;尊重申请文书的知识产权。